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  • hachie

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    Wow she really confused right now because Cole is probably one of the guys from Immortal City that actually cared for her and he has been lying to her for 19 years.
    And he was only one that showed affection toward her and help raise her.
    I was completely surprise that she called Syn, father and told him to kill Cole for her.
    So now Syn has finally realized that they had made her hate them when they evaded Immortal City and when they killed her nanny, the one person that she genuinely cared for.
    I cannot wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 19th, 2011 at 10:18pm
  • lizicea7x

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    she is having flashback
    doesn´t she think is odd that she knows them and has seen them since she was a baby without having any relation with them (as fas as she knows)
    June 19th, 2011 at 09:37pm
  • magmababe141

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    alright love the story still
    June 19th, 2011 at 08:36pm
  • hachie

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    So someone has taken her necklace and now all the memories of her past is just slamming back at her.
    And the more she is remembers the more her powers will come out more.
    She already demonstrated the same power as Syn and later on she will display more powers.
    I wonder how many different powers she has.
    She feels really vulnerable right now because the things that Damon told her is really contradicting the memories that are rushing back to her.
    And I bet both Zacky and Syn are worried because she is progressing faster than they expected!
    So now Rose has noticed her similar personalities with Syn and how she is the complete of Shadows.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 19th, 2011 at 08:10pm
  • yellowjellybean14

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    ok now that she has her powers and starting to get her memories it is getting that much more interesting but why is syn not trying to having more to do with his daughter. please do update soon.
    June 19th, 2011 at 07:58pm
  • VengeanceUniversity

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    I leave for a mini holiday and come back with a butt load of updates, which were amazing!
    Can't believe her hand caught on fire, that is freaking crazy. I cannot wait for another update, I'm getting so into this story. I love it, keep going!
    June 19th, 2011 at 06:41pm
  • VengeanceUniversity

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    I leave for a mini holiday and come back with a butt load of updates, which were amazing!
    Can't believe her hand caught on fire, that is freaking crazy. I cannot wait for another update, I'm getting so into this story. I love it, keep going!
    June 19th, 2011 at 06:41pm
  • MamaZ

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    so i'm guess the necklace is what has been keeping her memories away and now that it's gone she'll start remembering a lot of things from her past that may just help her see that she is really syn's daughter right?
    June 19th, 2011 at 05:14pm
  • starbella

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    i really really love this story
    June 19th, 2011 at 01:39am
  • bloodravyn

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    damn, i LOVE this so far!
    June 18th, 2011 at 11:54pm
  • hachie

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    There is no way in hell that she would lose her attitude toward Shadows after what he did to her.
    It just gave her more fuel to make Shadows suffer! X3
    And she already knows that Syn was lying to her and that really must have surprised him.
    I bet he sees himself in her when she is riled up like that! XD
    Good thing though, all the lashes have gone away because she would have blown her top off!
    I seriously cannot wait for her to finally find out who she really is!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 18th, 2011 at 02:15am
  • KellShadows

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    Up-date again soon! Really like the story! =)
    June 17th, 2011 at 09:27pm
  • MihaelaMitzy

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    This story is cool:
    June 17th, 2011 at 07:52pm
  • hmc09

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    great chapter, yet again!
    June 17th, 2011 at 07:02pm
  • ImNotThatGirl

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    Love it! Update soon, please!
    June 17th, 2011 at 06:55pm
  • MihaelaMitzy

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    I love this story update soon
    June 17th, 2011 at 11:24am
  • lizicea7x

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    how is hse going to react to the truth
    aww johnny i was starting to wonder what was going on with him
    more soon haha
    June 17th, 2011 at 06:16am
  • magmababe141

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    Dude that was legit! I was so confused on where her mark was man this chapter like blew my mind along with the other one!
    June 17th, 2011 at 02:56am
  • TheGoodLlama

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    Thanks so much for the updates :) Such a good a7x story!
    June 17th, 2011 at 01:36am
  • graceful swans;

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    This story is so awesome! You updated twice in one day too! I could hug you to death, but I won't because then you couldn't write anymore. :(
    June 16th, 2011 at 10:23pm
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