New reader here kind of, I've read the prequel long ago and I'm interested in where the story will go. However I don't mean to be a grammar nazi or anything but there are a lot of spelling errors mainly with your and were, you keep saying your when it should be you're and you keep putting the apostrophe you need for your, in were making it we're. I'm sure you don't mean to do it I sometimes breeze right through spell check not paying attention to what I am correcting or how I'm correcting it.
I've read the prequel of this story, and the 5 first chapters of this one and I truly love the plot and everything. ( --> *subscription*). Well the situation between Brian and Heather is so complicated. i love Jason. This child will be the seath of me =) His little sister is the cutest little girl on the face of the Earth !!!! I understand that Heather is still in doubts about Brian's sincerity. She's been through a lot of things because of him. It hurted, in your last story, to see her all alone during her pregnancy. I wanted to punch Brian for that. And when drugs came out, well, I totally agreed with Heather's decision. Now I know that she's trying to protect herself and her children, and no one can blame he for that. Yet, ...Brian and her were so perfect when they were together. They're a damn sweet couple and I was sad when things started to get wrong between them. I know that he's trying to have his family back. he's a sweet father. But I'm afraid that he won't be able to keep his promises toward Heather once again. But I want her to say that she'll give Brian a new chance, a new start. I imagine her tell him yes, but making some conditions. That would be perfect. But I know it sounds really too easy ^^ Oh, and last thing, I think I truly hate this Stephanie blonde girl with all my heart. I know she didn't do any wrong thing, but I can't stand her. This story, and its prequel, are really great. I really love it cause it sounds real, if you see what I mean. Sorry, I didn't took the time to review each chapter of this story, and I didn't review the prequel but I'll be more "regular" by now haha. You're a great writer :3 Hope you'll update soon! Bye,
um, update, update, update, because i want to read it, really, REALLY bad! it's soo good & adorable. I love sadie & jason is so cute how he worries about his mom & sister(: LOVE.
First off... I would have read this sooner.. but I started college and I'm still trying to get into the swing of things :) Secondly, I love the update! I hope Jason gives Brian a chance :) Thirdly, Sadie is adorable :P and Fourthly.... CONGRATS ON GETTING MARRIED!!!! I wish you and your husband the best in life :D