Finding Bat Country - Comments, page 5

KillJoySynner (100)

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oh shiz nats!!!!!!!!!1 more please!!!

May 31st, 2011 at 04:00am

Rachelish (400)

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I see a lot of potential in this story :) Its quite interesting already

As writers we ask ourselves, what drives conflict? Dialogue. Dont get caught up with describing everything or you will loose your readers. Trust me, I'm a description whore, but a lot of it is unnecessary clutter. And i want you to make me LOVE this story :)

Update soon x

May 28th, 2011 at 11:01am

Baby.Blue.Eyes (100)

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Omg what's gonna happen next?!?!?

May 28th, 2011 at 08:57am

Baby.Blue.Eyes (100)

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Like it :) update soon

May 28th, 2011 at 03:50am

Syco11 (100)

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plz write more I want to hear more and I see another person who likes A7X Zacky is hott

May 28th, 2011 at 03:48am