That was an awesome chapter because you gave us the platform for the rest of your story, everything you just said you can make your characters do now. Keep it up!! ;D Loved it
OMFG. Is Veronica going to give Mitch her vampireness? Cause that's what it seems like. I can't believe it! You need to update cause I don't like cliffhangers... Please update soon.
(P.S. I'm commenting ans getting abused by a pillow.)
I love this and wish I looked at it sooner. I'm jealous of Mitch, I love (in the obsessed way) Synyster Gates! It's not fair! -crys like an idiot- I wonder if Veronica is a vampire, a demon, or just insane. O.o Anywayyy, update soon please. =]
Wow this was pretty good, im interested to see where you will take this but you must update more!
Also just one error I'd look at; My mom was probably either playing with his laptop or comforting my mom who was probably crying her eyes out of their sockets.