Uncharted Territory - Comments

RAEGAN AND JOHN!
Pleeeeease!
They're already super cute.
I loved when she said "have fun at your parents' house" and he flipped her off

NO I LOVE THIS STORY.
Like really, I love it. And I am so interested in finding out what she did. It definitely seems like these girls are totally oblivious to the fact that Kenny and John have it for them. I dunno. I feel bad for Joel though, cause I definitely want Rae and John together, ya know?
It was so cute how he was saying not to go out with him though, haha. Oh John...

OHHHHHH, HE ASKED HER OUT FOR ICE CREAM :}
That was so cute. I think that, although Reagan and John are cute, Kennedy and Grace are just as aw-worthy, what with Kennedy's lingering feelings for Grace. I think maybe Grace didn't break up with John the way she should have, or maybe it was worded badly. I can't wait for the next update!

And I capitalized properly! My phone is nice enough to do it automatically (: Update soon!

This was such a good chapter :)
Keep it up! Can't wait for more

ah, the cliffhanger before grace's name was funny. it was similar to what they do on television, so i could totally picture reagan making a weird face and an audience laughing after that :} anyway, garrett and halvo were too funny... too? they were really great. and i like reagan's sense of humor. i thnk that if she were a real person, i'd want to be her friend- not because of the maine, but more because she's similar to the type of people i actually hang out with.

uh, i'm scatterbrained, sorry. anyhow, i think that kennedy walking grace out maybe led to something cute? i guess i'll have to wait for the next update to see if i'm right, but i don't care. i thnk they'd be a nice match, but maybe john would be really upset... or terribly angry. and although this was rude, “Really? Well you’ll make some pretty good money doing that in Tempe. I mean Garrett alone would keep you in business.”, i chuckled. and i've never read a book by sarah dessen, though i've always wanted to. whatev, the game reminded me of the one that craig and noelle play in 'it's kind of a funny story'. but the john and reagan moment was super adorable (:

my comment was long.
in a nutshell: slf;asfdkj i loved it, so cute and great and update soon!

Aw, I think she can fix him.
I loved the "So, I suck" part too! Haha

Haha, I love Halvo. :3
What did Grace do, though? Why's John so angry that she's back in town?

sarah dessen is one of my favorite authors.
i'm really liking this story.(:

also, i think that there's going to be drama with john and grace and maybe reagan won't know what to do and perhaps she'll side with one of them and hurt the other. or idk. i'm tired, it's almost 3am

oh, they met! i wonder what the party's going to be like now that they run with the same crowd (sort of) but are unaware of it. dang.

i love this! just sayin'
i really do (: i've finally warmed up to the 'two original characters' thing

John is going to be surprised that Grace is back, then Grace meets Kenny and falls in love with him. Meanwhile Reagan meets John and begins to like him also. Lol. Just my guess.
I wonder why Britanny hates Grace so much though.
Enjoy your vacation! :)

They met! I'm excited for the party! Love this :D

Love how the two girls met. I didn't see it coming or maybe I was just too pre-occupied with stupid school stuff. :)) Anyway, continue. :]

John is going to flip shit!!

I can't wait to see what happens at the party!

you are welcome, booboo!
...ignore that and pretend it was a sophisticated response to your thank you. please (:

so, i'm totally anxious to know exactly what grace did to john. i mean, i'm guessing she must have done something super bad, but, jared's hints weren't as helpful. boy, was he a mean-o. i kind of liked bitch jared, though. sometimes, people write jared as this quiet person who loves everyone, but, like, we're all human. no one is that easy-going. not even me, and i'm pretty dang easy-going.

still, update soon! i really want to know what's going on with ma gurl reagan and kennedito.
...i've been painting for three days. ignore all the horrible nicknames.

I really wanna know what grace did:/

:D

I'm curious as to why Jared hates Grace so much. And also, I really like Grace's relationship with her sister.

im so excited to find out what happened between her and john!
you are such a good writer like really