Okay, so the layout was so freakin' adorable. Just sayin', hahah! (: It only adds to the story, honestly; the story itself is lovely. I like how it's set up like a blog and how the writer of the "diary" is writing like she's telling someone the story face to face. Okay, that was super lame of me. A diary is a bit like talking to someone. Only their paper. Now I'm rambling. MOVING ON. I feel bad for the main character, worrying about her boyfriend and all :( However, I don't get if he was telling her that he wasn't going to take his phone with him everywhere or if he said he was going to kill himself or something. All I got was that he wasn't taking his phone with him everywhere. I feel like the character should detail that out a bit more, but that's just me and my tiredness right now. >.< I hope he's okay, though D: Anyways, this was great and I really, really hope that you win this contest :D <3
May 29th, 2011 at 08:26am
