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  • bones n' feathers.

    bones n' feathers. (100)

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    Update thisssss nowwww! D:
    January 19th, 2012 at 04:49pm
  • IComeAliveAtNight

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    well damn. i think i'm in love with this story. Mai girlfriend'll be jealous =p update soon.
    July 23rd, 2011 at 03:49am
  • polka dot perfection

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    I wanna know whT he means!!!!
    Update!!!
    July 1st, 2011 at 10:49pm
  • polka dot perfection

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    Loved it:)
    Especially the way u escribed the trippel threat. :)
    June 29th, 2011 at 01:14am
  • polka dot perfection

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    More!!!
    What happened?!?!?!?!
    June 12th, 2011 at 01:17am
  • Your Addiction

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    I love it! And... my brain's not functioning enough to be specific... But I promise that if you update again, I'll be able to leave a much more thoughtful comment!
    June 2nd, 2011 at 07:26pm
  • polka dot perfection

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    This looks amazing!!!!!!
    You two are so boss:)
    Cant wait for more!!!!!
    And they just need.to hiok up already!!!!
    June 2nd, 2011 at 03:50am
  • Unexpected.

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    oh my goodness gracious.
    that was amazing, and i'm not just saying that. seriously, that was amazing. the care you put into your words, seriously, i don't know if you want to write when you get older or what, but im just saying you definitely have a gift here.

    okay, now on to the actual comment now that i've got that over with:
    i now understand what the intro's were trying to say, seeing as now i have more information on the whole thing. i love your description, it paints a picture perfectly in my mind, and even with just one chapter i feel like i know who Scion is and i think that's what most authors try to do: you succeeded.
    i like how you put in the quote/secret. i was not expecting that at all. i figured it'd be Avalon who was afraid of it, who was the 'liar' but you proved me wrong, and i love that. a lot. i like how you put in the picture as well (:
    i liked the lyrics, they were good, and added to the story and i suppose the memories. my favorite part was when he first saw Avalon, and was nothing but numb. that was so true, and i seriously think that i, like, felt it. the numbness or however you want to describe it. i liked pretty much everything about this story, and im just..im in love, no joke.
    you didn't give romance either. most stories end with the happy ending, but you didn't give that, and i think that made me like the story even more.
    well, anyway, heh, thank you for getting this in on time (:
    June 1st, 2011 at 05:21pm
  • A S K I N G .

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    D: No comments?!?! WHAT!!!?!?!?

    Psh well, I'll be the one to end that.

    This story is really good and I love the details put it in it, I was able to picture the scenery, it was pretty.

    :]
    June 1st, 2011 at 03:45pm
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