But If We Sing These Words, We'll Never Die. - Comments

Right off the bat, I'm not a fan of teacher/student relationships, even if just for a fanfiction trope, but I do occasionally read this pairing, so what the hell. The writing isn't bad, but it's pretty fast paced. There are a lot of time skips, at least in the first couple of chapters. That is kind of a preference thing, but I thought I would point it out. But, like I said, the writing is not bad and has a lot of potential. Then again, this was seemingly updated 2 years ago, so you might know all this by now.

Well I have to say first of all I like the the layout matches the story and its a classic if it is indeed the same layout I remember from so long ago. I like it, it has a good beginning I like how it starts I felt what the main character was feeling or at least how I'd feel being in that situation though, it's really good.

OH GOD. Noooo. I want moreeee.

[comment swap] Although high school settings aren't really my cup of tea, this story is decent and I understand why people enjoy it. Your writing is nice and has a strong voice, something I appreciate in a story. All in all, based on the few chapters I read, it was pretty good. Keep up the fine work.

Oh wow. I absolutely love it. Just read it all in like 10 minutes or so. Please please please update very soon. Love My Chemical Romance and pretty much every story pertaining to them. <3

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Oh hey there. So, I don't like My Chemical Romance. So I just skipped to a random chapter to see what your writing is like. I didn't see any errors, kudos on that. You're a talented writer, I'll give you that. The descriptions didn't seem neither boring nor too vague. I like your style, although I couldn't fully enjoy the story since I dislike MCR and that type of music. But you have to write about what you love :P Keep it up!

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I'm so glad comment swapper brought me here though as I'm such a big MCR fan and I love fics based on the band as they're all so unique, especially yours! I personally think your story is amazing and can't wait to read more! you're such a talented writer and you have such a way of making it flow it's truly incredible, that's all I can say really! I look forward to reading the rest!

Havent commented in forever...well Im glad I (you?) gave Mikey sparkles back xDD
I don't want this story to be ver its so amazing.. :c
I really hope Gee forgives Frankie..<//3
UPDATE NOWWWAA!! <333

I felt your paragraphs were too long andyou could have shortened them. I skipped to a random chapter just to do something different so I had no idea what had happened during the earlier chapters. But I enjoyed reading it anyway, grammer and spelling is decent I can't find anythig to bitch about haha. It's great, good job =)

Ahhh I see what you mean that I might hate you. But, surprisingly I don't ;) I don't understand why Frank ran away though, to me it seemed like an overreaction on his part. And why did he just come home out of the blue? I totally understand why Gerard got mad, I would be too. Aww I hope Gerard's okay!

Yes, yes, yes! Do you know how long I've been waiting to get a Frerard story on comment swap? A long time! I'm so glad I got given this seriously! I've only read the first chapter but I am so subscribing, I just know I'mgoing to love it! Gonna read the rest now! Can't wait! :D

Comment Swap! I can't say I'm a big fan of MCR but this is defiantly a good story. I usually don't read these types of things but this is actually really good! Please continue. I have a friend who likes them though. I'll tell them to read this!

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Hey, so I’m a fence sitter for MCR but I still loved the story and the plot :) Your writing draws people in almost instantly and your grammar is wonderful. The way your write and the emotion you express can allow readers to relate easily and fall in love with both the characters and the story :)

keep it up x

I can't say that I am an MCR fan, or that I even like them. So I pretended this wasn't about MCR characters so I could give you a positive comment, because the story is really good and I can relate to the main character, because I have one too many times had to change high schools and restart my life when I was a teenager. You have a way of grapsing emotion and you write with confidence. Keep up the good work!!! :)

give me a second to pick my jaw up off the floor, there now wtf holy shit what the fuck... i mean that was unexpected. update soon, and thanks

Ahhh it's been a long time since I've read a frerard! This was a good fic to start on. I love Mikey and Sparkles... Sparkles is f*****g FANTASTIC! I wish I had a unicorn that puked golden chocolate. When are you going to update? This story is legitimately awesome (though I have to say you don't capitalise names very often. I like capitalised names. They make me happy :D) Awesome job though! Keep up the great work... and update soon!

paitence is a virtue, and i love you & this story

bonerkill. lol, god so i'm immature. anyway it wasnt longer but it was pretty damn close. love you too and update soon (hee hee that rhymed)

this is amazingly cute and funny im really lovin it please update soon <3

This is going pretty well, I just love how crazy Mikey is, can not wait for an update