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  • Hannahh

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    That was amazingg x3
    You decribed the feelings and reactions extremely well, and the descriptive context was fab ! Well done. Please write more !
    June 30th, 2008 at 10:42am
  • scottishcassie.

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    Sad.. Maybe you should make it like, a book that starts with a flash forward or something? That might be interesting.
    June 30th, 2008 at 10:19am
  • Twilightaholic

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    Bi the way ... I've suscribed, jst in case it's not a one shot xx
    June 14th, 2008 at 10:46pm
  • Twilightaholic

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    OMG It that a one shot?? please say no!!! YOU HAVE TO KEEP GOING !!!!!!!!!!!
    June 14th, 2008 at 10:45pm
  • Mrs. Mikey Way.

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    oh wow

    that's really good

    MORE!!!! You have to keep writing that=it's sooooooooo cool!
    April 4th, 2008 at 11:35am
  • Eremophobia.

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    Awesome story!
    March 11th, 2008 at 11:57pm
  • Violentbumpkin

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    Wow. That was great.

    I like his last quote.
    February 14th, 2008 at 02:22am
  • wispy-fantasy

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    Wowwen !!!
    that was soo cool!
    i usually hate vampire stories, but i love it!
    dun, dun dun dun. dun dun dun. DUN DUN DUNNNNNN!
    hehe
    ily xox
    February 12th, 2008 at 08:30am
  • xxxJimmysullivanxx

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    Clap I loved your oneshot it was good. I'll keep loking out for your writing
    February 12th, 2008 at 07:23am
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