Happy 125th Hunger Games! - Comments

What an epic and cool story, certified by CoolGuy42069.

I think I sort of like the idea of two tributes living instead of just the usual one in this quarter quell. It's not the most gruesome idea for a quarter quell, but it still puts a bit of a twist on things and allows for some leeway towards the end when the winners will be chosen. It'll make it more interesting since we won't know who Storm will end up winning with (since we know she wins because someone who's narrating a story can't be dead ) Great story so far and I can't wait tto see where you take things in the end!

Now that I think about it, your characters aren't quite original. Aspen is like Katniss, Gale is like her friend, the way that one kid volunteered for his "brother" that was twelve, how a lot of the parents dies in explosions, when that little kid was in the rain looking for food when the other kid tossed him a coin. Maybe you should try making more original characters, it bored me to see they are almost exactly the same as the other tributes from the real Hunger Games. Plus having
So many characters makes it hard to remember them all so having all of their POVs makes it hardest for the reader to really feel emotional for the charcters, it makes our story all over the place.

It seems like you kind of modeled your characters after the original ones. Like Axel beig handy with a bow and the sly, intelligent Foxface is represented through the redhead from District 4.

Nice layout but I liked the one with the black backround bettèr

Whoa. Jsjjhsjsksjkd I love this story so so so do SO much!!! More soon please!!!!

Wow! I love your new layout! I'm falling in love with the tributes, especially the one that keeps tripping and the boy with ADHD.

I love this:) great job! Keep going!

I LOVE THIS!!!! I was waiting for so long for an update, thank you for posting :)
More soon please!!!

Awh thank you, I was afraid my writing was atrocious :D
And I know, there aren't enough for my liking, so I decided I'd give it a whirl.
And yes I'd love that!
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I just finished Felicity's reaping... *is hooked*

I never get ANY good HG fics on here... so thank you :)

And a question... can I maaaaaaybe be an author so I can make a sexy layout??? :D Pleasey?

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Billie

Wow I wrote that before reading the first chapter sorry

Missing Quarter Quell. But if you haven't read catching Fire you wouldn't get it. So you should read it

Oh wow, first comment! :)
I love the Hunger Games, I have a fan-fic on here for it as well, so I decided to check yours out (which, by the way, you should feel free to share your opinions on! Hunger Games fans gotta stick together!) I like the way you set it up getting to know all the different players. I'll be interested to see how you narrate the games.
So yes, I'm subscribing. Impress me ;) jk
I'm enjoying your story so far, update soon!
~Carly