Child's Play. - Comments

The layout is easy on the eyes and simple yet good.

I love the voice of this story.

I was terribly pleased with our friendship.

That line is so amazing at how different it is. It's a different more creative way to say I loved our friendship.

This almost made me cry almost but keep in mind it takes a lot to get me to cry.

I wanted to know what it was; was it a piano? That's what I thought; well I thought it was a person until the end. It was very original and a nice change.

Great job!

This is amazing. :)

I'm sorry, I promised myself I wouldn't cry, but I'm crying!

"You've Already Written It!" Prewrite Contest:

Layout: Pretty, and simple, and went very well with the story!

Content: That was so beautiful, you had tears coming to my eyes. I loved how you kind-of held off the suspense about what was going on until the you said she wanted to cut out her mother's cancer. You are an amazing writer.

Overall: One of the best ones I've read so far. (:

The is absolutely beautiful. Fantastic job.

Darlin, that was 1 of the most beautiful, saddest things I've ever read! It was mindblowing! It was such a great experiene, reading it, so what was it like to write it?! 8-D *.*