Yes - Comments

... Freshmen are beasts okay. They always will be because they seriously just rock.

Anyways, I know the pain. I loved my seniors of this class and losing them sucked 'cause so many of them were those sweet kids that I would date in a heartbeat. The desperateness but not desperateness is wonderful; clearly, you're pretty adoring of him and it's not really infatuation but sort of something more. He's someone sweet and someone you need to creep on more and make him love you~ MAKE HIM LOVE YOU~

But in all seriousness, I can see why it's upsetting. He's someone special to you and losing him sort of feels like walking around with a marine on your back; painful and weird. Keep in mind that it's gonna be a learning experience for you, :) You'll meet more guys and, who knows? Maybe you two'll stay great friends. You transferred your emotions wonderfully into this, making it read much more realistically which is always nice, :D

I'm kinda upset that this story doesn't have anymore comments.
The layout is so simplistically beautiful though I haven't had a taste for pink Px buut I can get past that and love this story.
It was kinda sad how at the end she wrote what was truly going on in her heart. How she wrote that she wouldn't miss him when she actually would broke my heart.
Fabulous job, you better win! <33 (:

Oh My Gosh, this literally almost made me cry.

The banner’s adorable! Oh, it’s from the contest. xD But I still think you deserve credit for making it fit, like choosing a school setting because the picture looked like it was from a notebook.

Freshman girls are just props for the guys to fuck around with while their girlfriends fill out college apps. – This was harsh. But it’s good because it kind of adds to the story.

the one totally out of my league; [He] was the musical prodigy – any non-proper noun that comes after semicolons shouldn’t be capitalized.

fuck, even airplanes. – I thought this was really cute. :)

Awww, this was so cute yet so sad. It’ll be okay. *Pats you on the back.* You made a good story out of the experience, that’s something to be happy about. :)

:D I really liked this story! My favorite part was were you listed off the things you'd made wishes on (fifteen candles, stars, alarm clocks, airplanes)

What made it even better was that it was fluid and free of any grammatical errors. I'm sorry that things didn't work out with him but like the saying goes: "What doesn't kill you makes you stronger" (of course then there's also the quote, "Just because you're breathing doesn't mean you're alive" to contradict that but putting that aside, all in all I really did like this)

It's kind of like I want to hate him but I can't because his actions/ words weren't meant to hurt you. They were more like a gentle let down. A "Thanks for being my friend" perhaps?

sorry if this comment didn't make much sense, I'm better at critiquing poems, but a big thank you for entering my contest!

Okay...ignore the last line of that comment, because I sounded like a DICK. Okay Alex, just...go die in a hole. YES MA'AM.

Awww, sweetheart! This is so cute and silly and sweet and just d'awwwww. I love it, you know. And I'm sorry about what you went throught...but if it makes you feel any better, it made a really lovely story. :D