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  • Nanook

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    Wait a minute... what?!
    It's over?! Aww... I wasn't expecting it to be over already! It seems like this story just started!
    But... I love the way it ended, I suppose. So I guess we just assume that Chad and Leighton ended up together? That's good; I love happy endings. :')
    So... if you're doing a sequel, I'm all for it and will definitely read it if you post it, but if this is it... I enjoyed reading this. I really did. :)
    Fantastic job! I'll stay subbed, just because I loved this so much! And also in case you do choose to do a sequel. I'll be here. ;D
    March 20th, 2012 at 12:38am
  • Unspoken_Lies

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    Awwwww........
    I loved the concept of this story.
    I had some problems with it, but that's inevitable. There are a couple spelling and grammar mess-ups. And in a lot of places, it's very confusing. For every new speaker, you should skip to a new line, because everything is very jammed up.
    But I liked it overall, and it's over, but =)
    Goodjob!
    March 17th, 2012 at 05:07am
  • Seize-the-moment

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    I think you should make a sequel to this story,
    it was such a good story And your an amazing writer!!:)
    March 17th, 2012 at 03:58am
  • wildest dreams

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    Holla there, Dems. Well, even though you don't like the chapter, I think it's great. Starts something up with Freddie, lol. I've been through things like that...except I am therefore a girl and shit so it's different. LOL. Anyways, I love the whole chapter. Keep it coming ;D
    January 27th, 2012 at 04:06am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! :D Great job with it hon. :D
    Aw... I really hope that Leighton goes and talks to Chad and works things out. I hate seeing them not talking. But Chad really needs to apologize for what he did.
    And it would be best if Leighton got out of that house sooner rather than later.
    Can't wait for the next one, to see what you have in store! :D
    January 24th, 2012 at 11:24pm
  • Seize-the-moment

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    Love it, Can't wait to see what happens when Leighton and chad talk!!
    Update very soon!!:)
    January 23rd, 2012 at 01:58am
  • wildest dreams

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    Mm, I think this is amazing, this whole chapter. Chad and Oliva fighting was a good touch, I enjoyed that, lol. I think what their Grandpa was saying, was very true on a realist level. I wonder when Leighton will forgive, if I were OH BOY. But I am excited.

    Update soon <3.
    January 10th, 2012 at 05:42pm
  • Nanook

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    Great job with the update! :)
    Aw... so Leighton still hasn't come back, huh? And oh no... what's Ryan doing speaking for her? She's probably in something she doesn't want to be in... I think she needs to get out of that house, because it'll probably only get worse from here. :(
    Hopefully Chad and Olivia can talk to her and apologize to her...
    I like the switching up of points of view. Good change.
    Can't wait for more! :D
    January 10th, 2012 at 12:16am
  • Seize-the-moment

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    I can't wait to see what happens when leighton runs into them.
    Please update soon!:)
    January 8th, 2012 at 10:47pm
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update!
    Aw... so Leighton's moving in with another friend, huh? She's serious about this. But I wonder what it'll be like in her new surroundings? That new house she's at honestly sounds like a big party house to me. lol.
    Great update, though. Can't wait to see what you have next in store! I wonder how Chad's coping with this? :/
    January 3rd, 2012 at 01:23am
  • wildest dreams

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    Wow, I haven't been able to check this out in a while...I'm a busy chick. Anyways, I love it. I think the tension is perfect. I'm somewhat sadly Oliva and Leighton are like, OFFICIALLY not best friends anymore, but it was well deserved. I can't wait to see if things get better.

    Update soon <3.
    January 2nd, 2012 at 02:39am
  • Nanook

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    Yay, an update! Loved the new chapter! :)
    Chad kissed Brenda... :o What in the world? I thought he loved Leighton?! And Olivia knew and didn't tell her! Why didn't Olivia tell her?
    You could tell when she was talking about it before that though that she was talking about her, Leighton, and Chad. It was kind of obvious. :/
    So now what's Leighton going to do? :/ Poor girl. She can't avoid them for too long. She does live with them.
    Great update! Can't wait for more! :D
    December 23rd, 2011 at 05:17am
  • akanevampire19

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    I can't believe Chad kissed Brenda... Update soon, please!
    December 22nd, 2011 at 03:34am
  • Seize-the-moment

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    Please update again very soon,
    I don't know how long I can wait for the next one
    This chapter was so good!!:)
    December 22nd, 2011 at 03:30am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! :D
    Aw, so they went and ate at Pizza Hut. I can see the romance... XD
    And they're going to the movies! To see Happy Feet 2! lol. I want to see that... I saw the first one in theaters. XD
    lol. And arcades are awesome. I spend hours in those wasting money. :D It's what they're for.
    Anyway, lol, great update! Can't wait for more! :D
    November 29th, 2011 at 12:27am
  • MC Ninja Chick

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    Wow! This is a great story! Please write more!
    November 25th, 2011 at 11:05pm
  • eleighfritz

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    hmm Chads acting a little different. I can't wait to see if that builds up into something big! And I'm really interested to see what he is going to pick for their next date!

    P.S. Thanks for mentioning me! I love your story so how could I not comment! (:

    update soon! (:
    November 25th, 2011 at 08:39pm
  • Seize-the-moment

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    Please update again soon, I want to see we're chad takes her for there next date:)
    November 25th, 2011 at 08:35pm
  • eleighfritz

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    I just found this story a couple of hours ago and I just finished chapter fourteen! Throughout all distractions I found myself back here reading it! I am in love with this story! Please update it soon <3
    November 17th, 2011 at 11:07pm
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! :)
    lol. I would hate that job too if I were Leighton. XD I love sleeping in, and hate getting up early. I just... despise it. XD Even if ten o' clock isn't exactly early, early. :P It'd still be too early for me too.
    Uh-oh... foreshadowing at the end there? I hope not, because then that would mean that Chad's going to cheat on her! :( Noooo!!! That can't happen! And if that Blake guy just loves them together, why would he even ask that question?!
    Great update, though. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
    November 14th, 2011 at 01:30am