March 20th, 2012 at 12:38am
Awwwww........
I loved the concept of this story.
I had some problems with it, but that's inevitable. There are a couple spelling and grammar mess-ups. And in a lot of places, it's very confusing. For every new speaker, you should skip to a new line, because everything is very jammed up.
But I liked it overall, and it's over, but =)
Goodjob!
It's over?! Aww... I wasn't expecting it to be over already! It seems like this story just started!
But... I love the way it ended, I suppose. So I guess we just assume that Chad and Leighton ended up together? That's good; I love happy endings. :')
So... if you're doing a sequel, I'm all for it and will definitely read it if you post it, but if this is it... I enjoyed reading this. I really did. :)
Fantastic job! I'll stay subbed, just because I loved this so much! And also in case you do choose to do a sequel. I'll be here. ;D