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  • nattalieee_

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    Wow, the way you use language is just so poetic and beautiful. I can't wait to read more. :)
    September 2nd, 2011 at 12:34am
  • just sayin' br0

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    Aidyn, the first paragraph blew me away. The way you wrote it, I had like this movie going on in my head. Hurry up and write more! I'm super stoked to read the rest of this and what else you have planted in that head of yours. The loss of her grandma just like that made me kind of disappointed inside, not gonna lie. But other than that, keep it up!
    June 4th, 2011 at 11:07am
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