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  • WantedDistraction

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    <3 thank u! I appreciate your.. appreciation? yeah, lol :D
    October 12th, 2011 at 05:06am
  • Kooska

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    Awwweehh! I just read this whole story and it was amazing and it made me cry at some parts and the twin names! and awwww! Now to read the sequel :D
    October 11th, 2011 at 11:22pm
  • girlygirl.m

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    I saw it said you were going to write a sequil. Please hurry i so want to read it, it's an amasing story.
    June 29th, 2011 at 03:28am
  • lorrenjopie

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    This story is really good.
    I enjoyed it.
    Only things I had trouble with was all the describing of what the characters were wearing. I found that just a little unnecessary. Just some simple grammatical and spelling errors. Other than that this story was brilliant. I really enjoyed it.
    I love the sarcasm and randomness that Andy has.
    The cougar was a great touch. :)
    June 29th, 2011 at 02:56am
  • ninjapoptart

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    There were a lot of noticeable spelling and grammatical errors that I would recommend fixing ("I" is always capitalized and "shitless" doesn't have a "y" in it) because it made reading it a little difficult.
    June 5th, 2011 at 07:02am
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