June 5th, 2011 at 11:07pm
Judging for the "So You Think You Can Write" Contest:
9/10 for Originality
There were/expected to be a ton of cheater-type stories, but yours was a bit newer because it was a girl calling a guy a cheater.
5/5 for Quality
Good job...good quality.
15/15 for Incorporating Prompt
You definitely incorporated the prompt, especially with the surprise at the end where Kenzie ended up being a cheater/liar as well.
9/10 for Capturing My Attention
I'm not sure if it really captured my attention....yeah.
10/10 for Grammar/Spelling/Vocab
Enough said.
Total Points: 48 points from Moonlit.Memories for Round One.
Note: I am not including the extra points for comments/word count because I'm not sure what aquarius wants to do about that...just so you know.
10 out of 10 points for Originality.
As Moonlit said, there was an expected amount of cheater-type stories, but I actually quite enjoyed this one due to the fact that it was from a guy!cheater's point of view.
5 out of 5 points for Quality
15 out of 15 points for Prompt
10 out of 10 points for Capturing Attention
I like the way that you started off the drabble. It was different. You didn't go straight to the story, you dragged it out a bit to keep the readers reading.
10 out of 10 points for Spelling, Vocab, etc.
Total Points 50 + 2 points for the word challenge. = 52 points