Disenchanted - Comments

Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous.

That was beautifully written yet heartbreaking at the same time,
I love the way you describe things and the relationship between the two lacing through the paragraphs.
Perfect.

Okay, so I haven’t read a Frikey in forever so I’m insanely excited to read this and my inner fan girl is reverting back to old way, haha. I love the two pictures of the boys and I love that the chapter title is from ‘Disenchanted’. Such a great song. Now time to read!
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Woah! Now wait a minute, I’m not quite done reading it, but I knew that it had something to do with cancer! Just from the summary. I knew it! Ahhh, so sad though.
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Aww that was just so sweet and gosh, Mikey dead, ahhh. Wow, I loved this. It was beautiful. I loved that you bold printed the different times and dates because I think that just added to the importance of that you don’t know how much time you have with the one you love most. Ah, now I feel like listening to The Black Parade. This was just really amazing and I enjoyed it so much.

I love this so much!
The layout is simple, but it's very nice and fits with the story.
I love how its like a timeline! You showed the characters life in less than 3,000 words. Amazing.
Great job!:)

You make me mad, Mikey Way is not allowes to die, never never never ever! Nuh uh and no Way is that Way dying.! If I had a heart i would be broken by now thanks a lot i feel like a pansy

( loved it anyways)

This was so damn beautiful. First off, Frikey is my absolute favorite pairing so that definitely scored points right off the bat. The pictures in the layout were sweet, especially Frank's. He's such a cutie. The story itself was absolutely gorgeous. I loved the format; right from the beginning, I wanted to know what it was counting down to. Your writing style itself was wonderful as well; the way you described things was almost like poetry in some parts but it didn't seem over-dramatic, if that makes sense. I could see that it was a songfic of Disenchanted as well but it was a different interpretation of it. Overall, this is beautiful and I'm going to subscribe so that I can come back to it. (:

ugh, and i'm sorry about that strange accent on inevitable, damn keyboard's acting up >.<"

i like the way in which this was written. it's like various life updates you know? i've never read anything on mibba like it, very unique! oh god, when mikey got diagnosed with cancer i almost cried. why does everyone have to kill mikey?! haha, first the ghost of you video, now this? i also liked the secret song references in there! they were well hidden, nice job ^.^

also, that apology is nicely placed. it's done in a way, where you don't know who's saying it, and that's a good thing. it makes you wonder, is mikey sorry for what's happening to him, for making frank worry? or is frank sorry that mikey has to suffer? is he sad that he can't do a thing to fix it? it leaves you with questions that a story should leave you with, that simple apology was quite profound.

the doctor's "It was inevitable" made me so angry. i don't know if that was your intention, but that's how i felt, and i imagined frank felt the same way. how dare the doctor say it was inevitable. everyone's different, it's never inevitable.

gah! it was just well written, amazing!!

This is really kind of tragic, sad, and depressing.

But it's amazing. The amount of emotion put into it really makes you feel what Frankie is.

AndImighthavecried

That was so sad, but amazing =] I love where you took the song and how you made it into a story through time. I honestly almost cried, though... It was still an amazing story, though