Life (As We Know It) - Comments

  • Minnesota518

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    THis is sooooo cute! And I think you should make this into a story if it's not one already. It's been an amazingly long day so I can't remember if this is a one shot or not -- but yeah.
    I loved this and I think that their relationship is adorable and I adore John and I think that this is just super sweet. Sorry for babbling, but I thoroughly enjoyed this story.
    Oh! and I loved the concept of them writing about Jerry! I thought that was super cute too.
    Over all- it was magnificent.
    May 31st, 2011 at 11:35pm
  • jasonsudekis

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    AMAZINGLY ADORABLE.

    I have nothing bad to say about this at all. I usually start with what I liked and finish with what could have been improved but the only improvement would be MORE MORE MORE.

    I adored how their relationship wasn't perfect, and that made it very realistic. It was beautiful, the way she was working so hard but he still put up with it, and that distraction with writing about Jerry was so adorable and I could really see John doing something like that.

    Thank you for entering! :)
    May 31st, 2011 at 10:44pm