Bottlefish. - Comments

  • This judging is for the Underground Competition
    I sincerely apologize for the mix-up!

    10/10 Following the writing prompt.
    This definitely followed the prompt and I loved how you made the fish an active character instead of an object.
    9/10 Grammar and Spelling.
    Just a couple mistakes.
    10/10 Neatness.
    Very easy to read, I love the background color
    9/10 Original Layout/Creativity
    The layout is very plain but it is structured very well so I didn't take off too many points.
    I should of actually taken off a couple more since it did follow in the lines with exactly
    what I thought the story would be, but then I would be lying. The twist at the end was fantastic.
    Nice Job!
    5/5 Effort

    BONUS POINTS.

    +5 Turned in on time.
    +5 Adding a link to my profile and contest in summary.

    TOTAL = 43 +5 +5 = 53 POINTS
    June 17th, 2011 at 11:48pm
  • The story is cute. :). I like it.
    June 3rd, 2011 at 06:05pm
  • Lovely. :)
    June 1st, 2011 at 05:40am