First thing I notice is the font is really tiny! So, I'm gonna have to switch to default layout.... :(
I liked the summary. Short and simple, and still makes you want to read the story, which is perfect for me when I'm looking for new stories.
Hell, after reading just the first paragraph I can already tell that you are a ridiculously talented descriptive writer. The image in my head was perfect. You words fit together beautifully. It was a pleasure to read.
The rest was too. Just amazing description, one after the other after the other... You really did a good job on this story. Absolutely nothing for me to point out as a mistake. :)
I only have one question; what is he? At first, I thought human, but now I'm confused. Is he actually something else or is that just intense description you were using?
I liked the summary. Short and simple, and still makes you want to read the story, which is perfect for me when I'm looking for new stories.
Hell, after reading just the first paragraph I can already tell that you are a ridiculously talented descriptive writer. The image in my head was perfect. You words fit together beautifully. It was a pleasure to read.
The rest was too. Just amazing description, one after the other after the other... You really did a good job on this story. Absolutely nothing for me to point out as a mistake. :)
I only have one question; what is he? At first, I thought human, but now I'm confused. Is he actually something else or is that just intense description you were using?