POOR STAR!!! I LOVEEEE THIS STORY!!! mainly because my name is jess but all my friends call me star cause i wear a star neckalce... and i used to have a ex thats kinda like matt hahahahah update soon!! :D
As for some constructive criticism, there were a few minor capitalization and grammar issues. I also feel like there should be a little more description throughout the chapters. It would be nicer. It's a great story overall, though.
As for some constructive criticism, there were a few minor capitalization and grammar issues. I also feel like there should be a little more description throughout the chapters. It would be nicer. It's a great story overall, though.