Oh my gosh, that was wonderful! The layout is very, very pretty and it definitely made me read it. The whole thing just rolled of the tongue and I loved that. I got a bit of a Toy Story feel which I really liked, and I think if I was a Barbie you got all the feelings perfect. I hope more people get the chance to read this and you deserve tons more comments! I am without a doubt in love with this story and I'll have to check out more of your writing. No criticism, great job!
The layout is very, very pretty and it definitely made me read it.
The whole thing just rolled of the tongue and I loved that.
I got a bit of a Toy Story feel which I really liked,
and I think if I was a Barbie you got all the feelings perfect.
I hope more people get the chance to read this and you deserve tons more comments!
I am without a doubt in love with this story and I'll have to check out more of your writing.
No criticism, great job!