Bone Tissue. - Comments

amazing, as always.

i loved how you kept repeating the line "All I am is bone tissue." it gave the story a poetic feel.

it was awesome. your writing is perfect. i can't stop saying that.

That was fantastic.
Seriously.
I sometimes really love a story where you might be able to convince yourself that it really happened, that this might be the truth...this was one of those. The references were real and so that little voice in the back of your head makes you question whether any of this could've maybe at some little point held any truth and maybe you're secretly wishing a "yes".
I really liked the bone reference and how that's all that Frank felt that he was. A great metaphor and image.
I like when Gerard is made out to be an asshole because as much as I like him, I always have this little feeling that he probably is. :)

lol don't mind me commenting on all your stories and whatever.
I'm bored and you're an amazing writer.
and I'm a nerd and I read a lot so.

This is beautiful.

This was so......perfect.

I love it. I simply love it.

...kfjewlkj.
This was perfect.
And it's so ironic - that's exactly how I feel about Mr. Way.

You're amazing.

holy shit

and all i am is bone tissue, destroying

Wowowwowowow. Thats freekin amazing.

You know I love you, right? This is just a real tearjerker.

You made me hate Gerard...too sad, but you know, great <3

:'(
I'm gonna assume this was brought on by our conversation? This was heart breaking. So beautifully written, but heartbreaking.
<3

Well, that was depressing. Good though.

I'm not exactly crying, but fuck, I'm close
you know when you get that feeling as if someone's trying to crush your ribs and rip out your lungs
yeah, that
the thing is I wanted to try and write something similar a few days ago
but god, reading it was hard enough. I'll leave it to you, then, seeing as you kick ass at it as well.

So, instead of sleeping because it's almost one am and i need to get up at six, I read this. And I wanted to cry. You nade me want to hate Gerard. And that makes me sad.

You know you're a good writer when your stories make people hate what they love hahah xD

You don't even need to edit this shit, it was so amazing..I seriously, just, what the fuck. Really. Why must I be so obsessed with your writing.

bb, that was amazing and don't let anyone get you down. Bitches ain't got nothing on you.

I love you so much I want to fucken cry.

And I realy liked the repetitive line at the end of each paragraph, and the very last line. It was really moving, the feeling of hate and love, how confused and hurt he was, everything was perfectly set, the thoughts ordered, it was just really, just ugh. You know what I am getting at.

"Lying. Cowering. Breathing. Mastered. Dying. Fooling. Asking. Wanting. Slurring. Breaking. Wasting." Crash and Burn. Fuck you Gerard, fuck you.

I love yous♥