*Newish Readerish* AWESOME!!!! ^^ it's really great, I love the Franko-Cuteness and it's really getting interesting and complicated^^ Yeah, these two adjectives go in pair for me... sue me.^^'
And, you know, dude, it's great like that, seriously, keep it going this Way(sorry^^) and make the tour another story, like... a sequel, you know...
Keep on writing, and give a new chap soon!xD xo. Yvi
-New Reader- Oh my Gerard. I'm Falling In <3 with your story right now! It is sooo amaze! Write more when you can.. pleasseee? You write some seriously good stuff dude (: