You Hold Me Down with Your Eyes - Comments

Yes I caught up! This is a sweet and hot story; Mike is suh a babe and Aubree is a sweetheart! I love how slow they're taking things, I can't wait to see how things end up between them

I'm trying to catch up :)

No ok not fast enough update it now pls

I like how they met before she cut his hair and the surprise visit!

@ porn star-white
Okay. Can't wait for what it turns out like this time (:

@ Koolaidlover101
because like I said in the first chapter, I missed it. plus there's ideas that I didn't have before for this story.

I read the story before you started rewriting it but why are you rewriting it i thought it was pretty good the way it was. Not saying it's not good now because it is just a little confused

I don't remember this story before the rewrite, I guess that's a good thing because it'll be a new journey for me, hahaha. I really like it so far..(: So apparently you're doing something correct.

Okay so I had to take a minute and collect myself before writing this comment because I was crying. I'm so fucking sad this is over and just... I READ IT ALL IN ONE DAY!!! just *mind explodes*. I loved it from start to finish. The concept was too great and it was detailed and had excitement and just the ups and downs to keep you hooked on reading more. This is soo well written and I've completely in love with it <3
I just... I want a sequel to this.. but theres no room to and .. honestly I just never wanted this story to end. You did well.. too well. lol

Oh my god. The way he proposed was the freaking cutest thing ever. I love the hary potter references in this story. I read it all in one day i just couldnt stop. it was cute. :-).

Read this story in one day. I couldn't stop reading it no matter what I had to do. I loved it. I'm going to check out your other stories. :)

ahhhhhhh I DONT WANT IT TO BE OVER!! AHH I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!! SUCH A PERF ENDING!

this was my favourite story <3 I cant believe its over.

im crying so much omfg (': THIS STORY IS PERFECTION JFC. god bless your precious soul for writing this, i cant wait to read others! <3

awww

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Awe what a wonderful ending!!

Awww I'm tearing up! It was so sweet and cute and they got 3 babies! I lived this do much, it was amazing!

FUCKING LOVED THISS STORY!!!! AND I LOVED THAT FACT THAT YOU DID THAT HARY POTTER REFERENCE ABOUT THE UNBREAKABLE VOW!!!! :)

Yay! They're finally married! That was sweet!