I loved Frank's reactions with the coffee machine and I don't know how he managed to keep that job for 6 months.
I thought the ending was perfect though. It added that nice finality and sensuality that they were going to be having some fun all night long. ;) But that they also might evolve into a really good relationship.
So I enjoyed reading this lovely story of yours and I didn't find it much of a cliche (if at all) so kudos to you!
Yes, I am very fucking happy that you posted this. /enthusiastic happy dancing But, y'know, sad that it's over. :c It's just so goddamn cute with the 'doll' thing & then the ending was nngh. Thumbs fucking UP. Also; I'm totally taking my name at the end as a chapter dedication, mmkay? :D
SO. I like, I like, I like. @.@ I giggled the whole way through this. "Granted, it wasn't my best hiding place." "Many people would think this was a joke. Nope. Bob was deadly serious." Oh, and when Frank slapped Bob's ass. :'D Fuckin' funny.