I read the ending chapter a while ago, when you first posted it up, but I was too lazy to say anything, I apologize about that.
So the whole waiting really made me sad. You guys left us with a preview of what to come and then nothing. I got worried and now know that Jay has not been on Mibba is making me more worried. I really hope she's okay.
Aside from the whole waiting thing I loved this story. <3 I was kinda pissed when Gallagher was being a meanie to Kola and fucking what's his face(I'm forgetting names sorry) But who cares because it ended well :) And they're finally happy. It did take me off guard though when I learned that the -nudge nudge wink wink- chapter was the final chapter, a bit abrupt. e.o
Was it always the plan or was it something last minute?
Anyway, I'll continue reading your stories Sari as well as Jay's. Hope that's not too creepy. D:
Ahfgsjk. I just sat down and read the whole Play in the Surf and through the most recent chapter of this one and I am just so in love. The whole story is just the epitome of adorable and sweet and just perfection. wah My heart will explode just waiting for the update!
ASDFGHJKL FUCKING FINALLY. It sure as hell took that bitch long enough. Gallagher is just. Ugh. Team Kola FTW. Authogh, I do have to admit that that was hella romantic.
I love you tremendously! I am hooked, plz let them get together! Love is love is love! Sooooo hard to find, being bi-sexual believe me choices are not plentiful, so I don't bother, so as not to be used, or called easy or a whore! But update, gimme smut, gimme smut, gimme smut, you are my detonator! So many obstacles, just remove em just let em have 1 night! I'm soooo hooked! Too hooked! I loved the first one 'Surf', it was the shit! OMG, keep writing keep goin I need this story, I need it!<333 -Shakira