THIS WAS FANTASTIC AND CUTE AND PERFECT. Like I've literally just sat down and read the whole thing in an hour, it made me laugh and it made me cry. Thank you for writing it:)
this was fantastic I love the back and forth stuff. IT was cute, and crazy and got sour but ultimately they fell in luuuurv and thats all that matters. d'awe <3
Im so happy with the way you ended. I cant say that about most stories! It was such a pleasent experiance reading your story. You do have lots of writing talent! I look forward to reading other stories of yours.!
I love your story but can you please stop the fighting between Logan and Oli? I hate how Logan thinks it's everyone's fault and she doesn't ever do anything. Ugh. How do they deal with her all the time? But I'm just saying you shouldn't drag it out so much because it's kinda the same thing going on for the past like 12 chapters: They fight and make up. They fight and make up. But cool story. Update soon please!
But i'm so sick of them fighting all of the time, it's annoying!! lol. I just want them to hurry up an be together so they wont fight anymore!!! Other than that, it's awesome :D
Can they just hurry up and make-out already? oh wait they have... Can they just hurry up and have sex already? Oh wait they have... Can they just hurry up and get together? PLEASE? haha x