I really liked the last chapter, and you do a great job with the raw emotion of it all. I felt as though this could have been anyone feeling this and going through this rather than just a character on a page. I really do like this, and I'll be looking forward to your next update
I don't feel like commenting on how the last chapter was written or the intention it had. I just feel like telling you that your story is one of those that I don't read desperately, or urgently. It just flows and I like that. No clichés so far, which is quite refreshing. I want to read something that might be real. Thank you for writing, I'll be looking for your next update.
Well, I'm sorry that you think you'll never regain the use to your legs again and that your arms feel like noodles. Haha, but if you rest and then do a little at a time and such, I don't think it should be all too bad(:
And, I loved the third chapter. I'm kind of wondering if Rich is going to be an important character, such as a boyfriend or a friend, possibly even a neighbor or something. I don't know, really. I do know, however, that as I read more, I like it more.
I did think that the chapter was humorous and cute(:
I really like this. One of the few original fics that I've come across that actually don't bore me and I can enjoy reading. The plot seems like it's going to be really good and I can't wait for more(:
Nice story. When I first saw it I didn't feel like reading it, honestly, but after reading "I'm done being lonely" I knew this story was for me. At first it was difficult to understand why she kept calling her dad "Denny" but then everything was clear. I really liked it and hope you update soon.