Only Time Will Alter Your Vision - Comments

wonderful, keep up the amazing chapters guys

Ah! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Who was Matt looking at because I'm confused.

Oh no hahaha Matt you naughty boy. LMAO. Can't wait for more, loved this chapter :D

Nice chapter. Update soon :D

I love this story!!(:

I really did try to read the whole thing. But, the lack of summary just threw me off. And the chapter 1 is too long and I kinda lose interest half way through. I'm really sorry. I really did try reading the whole thing. Het fanfic isn't really my cup of tea so that's why it's kinda hard for me to get immersed in the story.

However, I can tell this story has potential and the writing isn't so bad. It's pretty good actually. The layout isn't the best but it's not bad either. And this story kinda makes me hate Zacky Vengeance which is almost impossible because I love him so much that I can't see any flaws in him. Ah, I love the world of fanfiction. ^_^

Keep writing.

this story kinda depresses me because of the way Zacky treats Charlie, I mean, it's just not right.
in pretty much every chapter, I'm just like "damn. what a manwhore."
but the story's good! I quite like the darkness of it, though. it can't all be sunshine and kittens.

Is Zacky ever going to change and is Charlie ever going to get better? Charlie used to be my favorite character, but now not so much. Just because she loves Zack doesn't mean she has to put up with the shit he puts her through. She should get a backbone and stand up to Zack because she has a daughter to think about. She can't keep letting Zack treat her like shit just because she loves him. I would have told him to go fuck himself and that he needs to stay faithful to his girlfriend.

I love how you were able to make Zacky very believable in being the villain and Charlie was very convincing and it was so sad to see her acting so torn over him all though he was clearly over her in the beginning! there were so many twists and surprises it was good! I got a bit confused because this is the sequel and it's a group-write but I was able to catch on quickly :)

My reaction to this whole chapter:
THIS BITCH!!!!!!!! (repeated about fifty times give or take a couple after Vengeance proposed to Carrot Barbie) THIS MOTHERFUCKING BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (repeated about thirty times give or take a couple after Vengeance proposed a "trial period") I WANNA FIGHT. (After Charlie's agreement to a "trial period")

Ohhh shit!!!! *smirks*
I wonder how Vengeance will take not being invited to their wedding? *gasps* Will Christ even agree to not inviting Vengeance?!

Anywhoo!! This is a great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! But until then... ^_^

Oh my bejezus! There's been a lot of drama O_O
This is going really great girls (: i love how the whole story is set up.

-I CAN'T BELIEVE Danny IS BACK!!
-I think Anthony would be good for Charlie. He can make her a better person (:
-Zacky and Gena need to go die in a whole (in the story, not real life)

loved the update (:
I liked the ending with P!nk's song.
To me it shows what great friends they are to Charlie and how
much they truly care about her. (:
I can't wait for more :D

Zacky es dead man!

Love this chapter<3
Emmy is my favorite, i love how she's sweet at one moment but then a total bad ass the next. Actually, i don't have a favorite, i love them all. They all complete the story very well (:
Can't wait for more!!

SECRETS DON'T MAKE FRIENDS GUYS lol loveddd it!

Loved the first chapter. Can't wait for yours, Monster.

AHHH! I LALALALALOVE IT!!!
'Hey Kid, Do I Have Your Attention?' was amazing.
and now that there's a sequel i'm like dying for more already.
(: i love the first chapter and i can't wait for more.
This is most likely the story i've been waiting for the longest out of
all the stories i'm subscribed to (: I love it already<3
I also love the title picture. Its the first thing that drew my attention.
**Btw, where did you get that Brian picture? I'm dying to know, it's amazing!!

OH SNAP CRACKLE AND POP I'M FIRST!
i love the first chapter!