Megalomaniac - Comments

I sorta had to remember my basic psychology when I looked at the title - a megalomanic is someone who has delusions of being wealthy, right? Sounds good enough to me xD Anyways, just by looking at the picture and summary, I'm already hooked. The picture is hella smexy and the summary, well, I love it. Fucked up characters are boss and I already love Hunter. :3 Moving on. I've always loved your prologue. They're always short and sweet, but they really say a lot, which is something not a lot of authors on Mibba tend to achieve. Anyways, I like how Hunter is sort of setting up the stage in this story and basically making a soliloquy about himself; that's so Shakespeare. He seems like a really intimidating and scary person, but I can't help but feel sorry for him a little bit. When he says, I want to be feared, it really adds a lot to his character without saying much at all. You just really want to get to know him.

I really enjoyed reading this. It's short, but like I said, it really does say a lot about Hunter. I'm looking forward to an update :D Lovely job so far! <3

I love how simple the layout is. I'm not that big of a fan of the fancy smachy layouts. The banner's kinda...
O.o weird I guess :l
I agree with turducken, I love the fucked up character already :D

. If I could worship myself, I would. Christ, if I could make a whole fucking religion dedicated to myself, I would. I'm that good.

Lmao this is one of the reasons why I love the character <3 Though he's got a big ass ego that could be a problem >.>

I'm definitely subscribing <33 (:

The idea seems fantastic. I've always wondered why no one writes from the bad guy's point of view.

And your bad guy has started out righteously. I enjoy his personality. Generally, main characters start out as whiny, dependent brats who, over the course of the story, mature into lovable people. Not so with this one. He started out as an asshole and I'm excited to see where he ends up.

Also, I think I like this so much because I can relate. I often feel that I'm pretty fantastic myself. XD
The character would appeal to others as well because if they don't have that confidence, it's thrilling reading about someone who does.

Again, I love the idea. Great first chapter.

I think I am going to love this. I really like these kinds of stories. You portray the psyche of the character very well, I can totally imagine what kind of a guy this is. I don't have a whole lot to say right now, but I'll subscribe and hopefully I won't be disappointed. Looking forward to the next chapters.

I don't know why, but I am always drawn to the fucked up characters, just the ones who always seem to screw everything up. Especially if they enjoy doing it, like the type of person with a God-complex. I just love them. And without even reading anything expect the summary, I already love Hunter. I am so excited for shit to go down. :D

Ah, this is what I adore about your writing. You just cut the crap and get straight to the point, no need for dressing it up in flowery descriptions or pretty words. It's just... raw. Which really compliments Hunter's personality, I think. He doesn't seem like someone who would go out of his way to make things pretty.

I mean, a person has to be pretty fucking fantastic to get away with the kind of shit I have. I'm even amazed by myself. If I could worship myself, I would..
Like seriously. This is not fair. What do I love him so much.

The villain's perspective is always the best, in my opinion. I love getting all psychological because it's so interesting to me. They do some weird shit, and it's always the most entertaining. It's so annoying when people try to play the victim. He knows that he's fucked up, and he admits it. Hunter is my favourite of favourites. Why is he so awesome? I don't know. But he is. I love him.
:D

It's very intersting to have the antagonist as the main character in the story since that happens like hm...never. It came across that the main character is very concided and cocky. So I really can't wait to see how he devlops.

That guy in your banner looks hot. Mhm. Sexy with the whole cyclops thing going on - pshyeah.

This guy, the evil guy in your story - I'm liking him a lot. He seems, hmmm, honest? Even though, of course, he just admitted that he was a liar and such. I'm wondering too whether your story title is an actual word and whether or not I should google define it or not.

I like this idea; although, because I just read another fanfic that had the same theme like thing going on, I can't say that its' as original as your other stories (which I love by the way).