June 18th, 2011 at 08:12am
Drop Dead, Kid - Comments
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im interested yto see where this is going to goJune 15th, 2011 at 04:54am
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Awww poor Andy:(June 14th, 2011 at 02:57pm
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i really like this story please continue :)June 11th, 2011 at 05:07am
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First I gotta say
I love your layout and banner picture
It made me laugh
This story is very interesting
I don't know much about Black Veil Bride's
But they sound interesting also
I love how you wrote this
Slow at parts, but overall nice
I love when people write or have that realistic feeling to Band Fan-Fictions
Cause most don't not saying names but I think you get the idea
I also love the good mixture of dialogue and descriptions
Keep up the good work
<3June 10th, 2011 at 10:57pm -
First off layout is grand caught my attention and set a feel for the story right away. Nice intro right off lol it gives a great sense of character along with setting and such. I like it so far even though slash isn't my thing. You have very good character building traits along with good situation usage and realistic features.
I kiiiinda want things to move along faster but it's still good. I like this because it seems realistic like such things actually happen and it's relatable which draws the reader in. I really dig your writing and the style but the story itself isn't one for me.June 10th, 2011 at 10:18pm -
I really like this so far :DJune 7th, 2011 at 08:53pm
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oh I like this ^_^
it's mysterious so I'm interested
and this story makes me wanna hug Andy.June 7th, 2011 at 08:36pm -
I like this a lot. Hope you can update soon, as you've caught my interest (:
Which I suppose isn't difficult, but still.June 5th, 2011 at 09:50pm
And... poor Andy for losing his job and all :l