This was quite and interesting read. I love the way that you incorporated the porno into the story. I liked how you used the fact that the porno was corny and cheesy and in a way stupid. You didn't make the porno all amazing cause frankly speaking most of them aren't and I found highly amusing that the porno in a way brought them back together somewhat. And I won't be shocked that they were better then the porno, it's not hard to be better then a porno. Thanks for entering mine and Kayla's contest and good luck!
August 19th, 2011 at 07:20am
