I'm a new reader and I love how you portray everyone. Especially Spence. I must come back to your first case though; I am an avid reader of Laurell K. Hamilton And Richard is one of my most despised characters in literature. He is a human serve t persay, but more so he's Jean-Claude's animal to call. Anita is really his Human servent. Anita is my favorite Heroine of all time at the moment. But I love your use of Richard, even though I absolutely despise him with every fiber in my e tire soul. If I could kill him without killing my four favorite characters: Anita, Jean-Claude, Nathaniel, Asher, and Michah. So anyway. I adore this story. I love each and every case you've put out.
Haha I love Reid's attempt to flirt! I would've read this sooner but I was at a My Chemical Romance concert! xD Best night of my life(: Great chapter! I can't wait for more! xD
Haha I liked the part where Kelsie caught Spencer. SHE KNOWS IT! (And I'm pretty sure she likes it) xD Anyways! I can't wait for your next update! <3 Crystal
I just found this story and I just finished reading it in it's entirety (at least thus far) I think you've done an excellent job at capturing all the CM characters personalities...they definitely seem believable! I adore Kelsie...I can't wait to find out more regarding her past and her abduction...the whole part about kids...that definitely struck me as strange...does she really not have any? It seemed like either she was lying about that or that perhaps she couldn't? Maybe I'm reading into that too much. Please update soon!! I'm completely in love!
Theatrical new case, I love it! However, our darling Dr. Reid needs to pluck up his courage. He's intelligent, way intelligent, cute and a perfect catch, he needs to do the math. Kelsie would be stupid to not want him ;) Loved the update, as always!
Derek laughed, "Hot and a Trekie." "And once known for some awesome sex." Again, Spencer choked on his coffee. oh my god, Kelsie is so funny! and haha, I'd expect a in yo' face kind of expression for Spencer to Morgan. :O Spencer better take JJ's advice and ask her out. You know what would be weird. If someone in the case started making advances on Kelsie. Spencer would be forced to take his girl.
I absolutely adore this. I can't even begin to describe how much. Your balance of everything is perfect. When i'm reading the chapters, it feels like i'm watching the show. I really hope Spencer gets the courage to ask Kelsie out soon, I can't wait for their first official date. Update soon!
To put it bluntly, your story is fucking amazing. I've just recently started to watch Criminal Minds and reading your fan fiction has totally helped me out with getting to know the characters. I loved the past two investigations, I think it's incredible how you can manage to create them and still keep up with Kelsie's background and the overall plot. I applaud you immensely. I also agree with alexismae; about seeing the team in social environments. The latest chapter has definitely been my favourite. I just adore how much Kelsie and Spencer's relationship has been sprouting. Please update soon!