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  • Kawaii Emotions;

    Kawaii Emotions; (100)

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    I fell so behind, but I still love this and I want Dom to get a man and I want this to be a zombie and come back from the dead.
    November 6th, 2011 at 09:51pm
  • ParaMuseChem

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    Yesss, an update! I've been waiting for this story. I quite like where this is heading... associating with the enemy and all. Eli seems sweet... and attractive. I can't wait to see what happens with him next, and what the rest of the band think about Dom's little encounter (if she even tells them about it, that is).
    And I have this little arising suspicion that something may even be blossoming between Jude and Kyle... but I guess I'll just have to wait and see. I still love Jude--he's just so adorable.
    Anyway, great work so far! Please continue!
    August 25th, 2011 at 11:46pm
  • divine;

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    I love the concept. The layout is pretty and the story itself is highly enjoyable. :D I like Dominics character most likely because I have a friend like him. X3 Good job.
    July 16th, 2011 at 08:02pm
  • masked beauty

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    I love this story; the layout is amazing.
    I love judes character and plus he is good looking!
    I love the way you write and I admire it.
    July 15th, 2011 at 12:38am
  • ParaMuseChem

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    I really like this. It has me laughing so hard at times, seriously.
    I am loving Jude's character, he seems so adorable and sweet,---not your typical lead singer type. The other characters are all really interesting too; extremely entertaining people. I haven't really been able to decipher their personalities so much so far but I'm sure that in later chapters their individual temperaments will become more apparent. :)
    I can't wait for them to start performing. It must be such an amazing experience and I can actually say that I'm jealous of a bunch of fictional characters. It's great reading about their excitement too because it makes the characters and their situation all the more interesting and believable.
    Keep going! :D
    July 6th, 2011 at 07:20am
  • goodbyeeeee

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    I really like the prologue. It gives you a little bit of information, but no too much that you know practically the whole story. Since it was short, I'ma read another chapter. Woop. :D

    Wow, this sounds interesting. I like how the teacher dude was all screaming and they all thought they were in trouble, but they actually got in a good predicament. :) I think I'm going to come back and read some more, because this is really eye catching! :)
    July 4th, 2011 at 06:14am
  • samusdorothydarby

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    Dom's hilarious.
    Jude? Well, Jude's awesome because he's an insomniac. I feel for ya, Jude!
    I just used his name three times in one paragraph.
    Sam's pretty silly xD
    And Kyle's just great because she slept through all of that.
    More soon, please!
    Or the flying monkeys will come after you :P
    June 28th, 2011 at 11:47pm
  • Kawaii Emotions;

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    My lady nuts XD
    June 28th, 2011 at 08:14am
  • samusdorothydarby

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    They're all so adorable! Especially Jude. I love how he's all self-conscious and stuff. It's cute :3
    June 20th, 2011 at 07:33am
  • Kawaii Emotions;

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    They seem like a loveable bunch. Sorry I have no idea where the lyrics are from.
    June 20th, 2011 at 06:09am
  • Kawaii Emotions;

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    You can defenitley see the dedication, but I'll have to wait to give my actucal feedback.
    June 17th, 2011 at 06:23am
  • samusdorothydarby

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    I'm super jazzed for this story (:
    I'm subscribing!
    June 17th, 2011 at 05:58am