Even I Can Fall in Love - Comments

Love this sooooo much. Read through it all twice in about an hour- jeez. Loving this so much. Update soon~?~?~? <3

Amazing chappy. I loved it.
And yes I'll keep saying it. Your writting is amazing and I'll keep supporting it. <333
Love ya
xo

yay update! v good :D *gives cookies as reward*

i like it :) update soon?

I'm soooooo happy you updated. :,D
I loved it.
You're very welcome love. I'll keep supporting your writing. It's amazing.
Love ya
xo

Oh yayyyyyy an update!! :D It's okay, I forgive the wait ;)
Ohh I really missed this story <3
Awwwhh poor Mikey, what's Frank have to do with his session? O.o :)
UPDATE PLEASE?? <3 :D :D

dawwwww, thanks for the update!! idc if it's sucky, at least it's an update!!!! :D

hhmmm, I really am worried... what the fuck does Wentz want to do now?!

~update when you can, my dear :D

update soon!!! I love this!!! I find Mikey really really interesting :D update soon

Frank, get over it. :)

I love this story!! It's so different <3
Frank, get over it, you're gonna like Mikey :D
Please, please update? I want to read more!!
Fantastic story <3 <3

These are some mistakes I’ve noticed, hope you open to a critique or two.
1. 3rd paragraph, ‘was already sat’ = was already sitting

2. 4th paragraph, ‘did you get woke up last night?’ =
A few options, actually many in this case,
‘did you wake up last night?’
‘were you woken up last night?’
‘have you woken up last night.’

3. 5th paragraph, ‘till = until

4. ‘and shoved it into his already mouth full of food.’ = ‘and shoved it into his already full mouth of food.’

5. Black boxers, black shorts, shoelace color=?

6. ‘I got drug into….’ = I was dragged into…., I was drug into….’

7. The liv’ = the living room, don’t get lazy.

8. ‘and I sat down on the couch, Mikey sitting next to me, with Ray, and then Bob.’ = Mikey sat beside me, along with Ray then Bob.

9. ‘I didn’t know anything about!’ =I didn’t know anything about [him]!’

Hey, I really loved this :33

Mikey is so cute, hope you update soon ;))

I looooved it. Buuuut I think Frankie is takin a likin to Mikes. O.o
Buuuut he doesn't wanna accept it. Ohhhh
Thanks sooooo much for the awesome chappy in my name.
Love ya loves

Wooooohooooo. You did it !!!!! You went over your laziness LoL
Love ya

Ohhhh this seems very interesting. I already like it.
Love ya both.
Ops popped your comment cherry. LoL