AHHH BETH! i love this so mch. I love the only thing gee said at the end was "fuck me" lol. that made me laugh. Your amzing and i'm so hppy to see tht your writting again. =) Cn't wait for more.
Gerard and Frank stood in the doorway of Frank's room, watching in despair as the inferno blocked their only exit, trapping them in as it prowled across the hallway, through rooms and down the stairs. Gerard pulled Frank back as the fire rose up higher with a roar and a rush of heat.
SOrry i didn't comment on the last chapter i have only just checked the ye olde email and seen that you updated .... TWICE wooop it really must be my birthday tomorrow if i get two updates for an a-fucking-mazing story like this one! brillant two updates ...... Gerards being all nice to Frank. what i gotta ask is why are they sat/stood in Franks house looking at a picture when THE BUILDING IS ON FIRE!?! well i understand way frank went in but maybe it's time to leave now! brillant can't wait for more! UPADTE SOON! xxx
EEEKKK!!!! sorry its taken me so long to message you on this. fuck....ur amazing.
but i hate you.
HOW THE FUCK COULD YOU JUST CUT IT OFF THERE!?!??!??!?!?!??!?? AHHHHI WANNA ANOTHER UPDATE MEANIE FACE! i will send killer hamsters after your sorry ass!
*grummbles* omg i love your writting though. i can't stay mad at you. Your writting has gotten soooo good. i loved the line Frank felt salty liquid surge over his eyes in a torrent of despair and defeat.
Wow. I would kill to be able to write like you. or maybe, *gasp* when i send the hamsters for you, i'll have them strip you of your amazingness before they nibble you to death *cringes* that doesn't sound very lovely. nibbled to death.
I'm rambling....and this is gonna be ridicously long....so i'll let you go now. <333 all my love, jen
Again, sorry that i'm so sucky with my commenting. I take way to fucking long. but i will get more diligent, i promise. This is awesome. sheer amazment. Woa, i spelled that wrong, w/e. I love the little pile of carnage thing with the grass. made me laugh. Very well written as always, and i can't wait for more!
Woooot an update ..... when i got the email saying you had update i nearly had an excitment attack lol (okay that was freakin random i'm not a moron honest ... i blame my tierdness) any way brillant update!! I'm glad you taking it slowly and trying to be realistic cause it can be annoying when someone writes a story and two people meet each other one day and the next day they love each other...... so yeah go realistic-ness ..... can't wait for the next update xxx
As emotionally disturbing as that was, it was written extremely well and I just felt so bad for Frank. So the lack of updates is the only down-side to this story, but as long as they get here I don't care how long they take to arrive :)