Trust Will Fade - Comments

You need to make this into a story bc there was no ending!

This was really good. Your style of writing is beautiful and I would've never picked Brian to be the abusive one of the band. I really enjoyed this ^^ thanks for joining. :)

I loved this a lot. The emotion was so thick, and it was so intense, and I definitely think that it was an amazing piece of writing. I absolutely loved the first line. I didn't notice any spelling errors at all, and no grammar errors either. I also like the fact that Matt immediately stood up for Adeline, because of the fact that I can't see him sitting by and letting it happen in front of him. Overall, I really loved reading this entry. Good job. ^_^

At first I didn't think I was going to like it in the least, but I really ended up liking this one shot a lot. I'm happy with the way you ended things, and how Matt was there to teach Brian a lesson. I love the female character and how she was determined to stand by her vows of marriage, even if it meant staying with Brian, who was abusing her all the time.

Auch. That was kinda hard to read, I can't imagine Brian hitting a woman.