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  • colorful.panda

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    oh god i love this storry (: hehe write more please x00
    August 15th, 2011 at 09:29pm
  • Ordinary

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    surprising how one girl can make him change his ways. he was being a real asshole; from the way he acted when he was younger made him seem so sadistic. i guess he got what he deserved but i feel bad for his wife and daughter :<
    June 8th, 2011 at 11:47pm
  • WeeklySweet

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    Awesome! I like it so far. Update again soon please
    June 8th, 2011 at 10:27pm
  • yasso

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    omg :).. msa bgad ya sara u really talented wlahy :) we story amaziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing one really :) keep up goin babe :)
    June 8th, 2011 at 05:51pm
  • Angier

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    Sounds awesome so far. : )
    June 7th, 2011 at 11:01pm
  • Anotherday

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    I love your discripting style but the white writing on black backround looks relly cool but maby enlarge the writting a bit i found it a little difficult to read but thats probubly just me, otherwize brilliant start to a hopefully brilliant novel :)
    June 7th, 2011 at 10:20pm
  • Ordinary

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    its seems pretty interesting :]
    update soon!
    June 7th, 2011 at 10:14pm
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