Three Hearts - Comments

Nice.. I want more please

Oh my gosh guys!! I love this story! You've GOT to update it and soon! Please!!!!

:) I'm just that good!!!!!!!!

HOLY SHIZ! not even I expected that!!!

Oh my god! I love this story! It has so much love, friendship, and all around it seems like fun! I can't wait for another update! Hope it's soon.

When the hell are you gonna update?

great story. u dudes work well together. poor kat!

NO! DON'T END IT!!!!!!!! I like this story!!!!!!!

Love it Kat, Beth, and Megan! Keep it up!

Love this story so far! Update!

The main character is kind of annoying, and the stereotypes are so thick it's hard to really enjoy the messages you're getting across, but for a light drabble or whatever it's alright.

haha ya I know.

haha i wasnt impying u guys werent xD sry if u thought i was though :c
anywayz i was just saying, u knw how my mind is Megs.. my mind is all "oOoO a rainbow *gasp* and theres an ice cream truck!!!" n then i read certain chapters n i was all "thats not a rainbow O.O ...or ice cream!"

Exactly. XD

Ah LAMBinLOVE I do love you.
Wow dont you think we are virgins too?

u guyz r like... messing up my virgin mind with certain scenes *awkward cough* ... had to skip a part or two *awkward coughs again* ...but u guyz r pretty awesome @writing so i say... write on! ..hehe get it.. right on?.. write on?... yea?.. no?...okay.. sry :P long day hehe

I'll be your editor.. Please? Im really good at spelling and stuff. Pleeease??? Let me know :D btw love that part 2 chapter. It was delicious :)

Hey um actually we do need an editor if either of you two are interested!

The layout is very nice and the summery is pretty interesting, making me want to read more. But I did find quite a few mistakes in the first chapter, but those mistakes are easily fixed.

I believe this story could also use a bit more detail and less cursing. I mean, I know people curse a lot now-a-days, but if such words are constantly used in a story, it gets boring and redundant fast.

Nice job so far :)

This is really good so far. The layout is really creative and unique, and it totally fits with the story. I only read a few chapters (I'll catch up, though), but it's...wow. It's descriptive and flows nice, and the plot isn't like something I've ever seen on Mibba. The summary was very well written and intriguing, and the title is also very luring(: Good job so far, all of the authors. Keep updating! You guys have a nice writing style :D I see few grammar and spelling mistakes.
Awesome job!