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This is honest, pure, and very engaging. Your writing style is to-the-point and beautiful, and I can't wait to read more to find out what else happens. It's so touching. :)

I love the style of your writing, especially the chapter that just said "The butterflies didn't work" It was short, sweet, to the point and I loved it :) Keep up the good work!

AHHHHHHH im yelling el-oh-el jay-kay!
i really like your story girl

i love the form of this little story you have going!
i'm intrigued to see what you come up with next :)

i love this,
the butterfly thing didn't work for me either

you should update this soon x

What you did for that girl was really sweet. Please write more. And yes, the butterfly thing does help.

This is beautiful, in a heartbreaking and honest way. I have a friend who hurts herself, and I think I'll tell her about the butterfly thing.

Oh. I understand the butterfly thing fully now.
But I'll still keep with the smiley face thing.

Heart-warming wonderfulness :3
I love it.
And for once, I don't care that a chapter is only one line. Because in that one line it means something.
And to fit a meaningful message in one line, that's amazing. It takes people on here a full 2,000+ words to do what you can do in one line. Wow..
Again, I love it[:
And your butterfly thing is genius. I think I'm going to start doing that, except I'll write something like 'It's okay.' or maybe smiley faces or something. I don't know, all I know is now the pen I carry everywhere has a purpose now(:
Update soon... Or I guess write again soon. It's not really an update.... Well, you get what I mean!
<3

Aww, i love what you did for that girl.
Bullies suck :P
You seem very nice and caring. :)
Keep writing. pleaseee :3

This story is great (: I love it. Keep writing. It's very genuine and sincere. The thing you did for the girl was very kind...

I've done the butterfly thing, actually still do.
I heard it in a quizilla story a long time ago, except when you harm yourself a butterfly dies.
So the point is;
If you hurt yourself, you hurt someone you love.
It's been working for me for a while, I haven't had a butterfly on ms in months. :)
I also told my best friend now boyfriend what they meant. So he reminds me not to hurt myself, and most of them have his name on them. I don't like hurting him, I haven't drawn a butterfly at all except for in my notebook last night. It looks so crappy looking I can barely tell what it is! :)
I think you're a great person and that this is a great story! :)

I love this - what you did for that girl was so nice - and yeah the butterflies i found they were a fail too - try squeezing ice cubes - specilly if your angry - even if it doesnt make the urge pass - your hands will be too numb to hold the blade - works for me , try it sometime if you want , back to this story - i love it its so honest x

It's amazing ahh :3 but the beginning you put there instead of their.. or some otehr there form >.> but other than that I liked it. XD

It's amazing ahh :3 but the beginning you put there instead of their.. or some otehr there form >.> but other than that I liked it. XD

It's amazing ahh :3 but the beginning you put there instead of their.. or some otehr there form >.> but other than that I liked it. XD

I think it's amazing that you followed the beautiful girl into the bathroom and helped her :)
She must have felt so much better after that. And the butterfly thing I can relate to :/
I draw on my jeans though so no one can tell me to wash it off. I got tired of people asking me why those stupid roses were on my hands :P
Now I only draw on myself when I'm wearing shorts :)