The Hunt - Comments

That was so funny and awesome. I was routing for Thorne haha. I would read more of this

omg, like i can't even! O.O
I LOVE THIS!!

I liked this!!!
I know I probably shouldn't be saying this since I'm in the contest too. . .
but I honestly really liked this(:
Guess Fisher got what he deserved huh ?
It's probably a slap in the face for him xD
I won't subb. . .Even though I really REALLY want to.

To be totally honest, I wasn't the biggest fan of this.
It wasn't really bad or anything, I just didn't exactly like it. I can't even really tell you why.
The plot might have been it; it seemed a little psychopath-y. Maybe that just comes from watching way too much Criminal Minds -.-
It was a good plot, but Fisher came off as a bit of a psychopath.
The names were interesting, but a teeny bit unrealistic. I mean, I'm all for odd names, but it just seems like Thorne, Fawn, Fisher, Pheonix, and Kolt are all really out there and that probably wouldn't happen in life. I don't know; that's not going to count against you at all, because that's just a personal preference, so don't worry about it.
I did very much like the "wolf at heart" thing. That was clever. There were a couple of those in there that were pretty awesome.
Good job, though, overall, deary. :)

Haha. Why yes i very much did enjoy that 'a dog is a wolf at heart' line. It was fucking epic. As was this story by the way.
Loved it.
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