I LOOOOVE This! Also, this reminds me a story called 'The Screwtape Letters' sort of. It analyzes sort of what's going on, in i guess a somewhat scientific way, if that makes sense? Except, that book was boring, and this story isnt.. ahahah. Update Soooon!!
I love how often you update. You have no idea how greatful I am of that. :) I CAN NOT wait for more. :) You always keep me gluesd to the edge of my seat.