i honestly can't wait for her to kick his ass. pete is such an asshole in this story. (in a good way, haha, if you can actually produce negative feelings about a character who isn't supposed to be an antagonist, that means you're a good writer.)
anyway, i always wondered what naomi would be like with a little girl, aww :') but then again, lewy playing with a little brother is also very cute. naomi kind of seems like the type that would pine for a girl but always end up with a boy haha.
I dont know what to say. If I were Naomi I would really question leaving lewis with Pete. But he has got his parents there so it should be fine. I would definitely not do any favours for Pete and I would never speak to Kate again
Gosh I haven't commented on this in forever! Sorry but I just caught up. Pete, as always, is an ass. I doubt the Robert relationship will go anywhere and Eric needs to disappear. As for Kate, I don't think she would have done that but I guess I wouldnt put it past Pete to try.
okay, now that i'm home IF PETE DID IT HE DIES. Naomi has really come a long way from being a girl, she's a woman that handles herself and Pete's still a boy. she deserves a MANNN. I'm sad about what happened to her, but I think she needed it, even though she didn't realize at first.
oh no, i really hope eric is lying. i don't think kate would do that, though i wouldn't put it past pete to try and get with her when they were younger.
i love how you incorporated robert into this story. i was wondering when he was going to come along...
and i know whatcha mean about the west side language, i was just there a couple days ago (i'm from the south loop.) i'm going to riot fest too, maybe i'll see you there! haha.
frequent updates are appreciated! I love seeing you updated, I get excited. This chapter; your writing is amazing. and I'm still cheering for naomi, she's tough, she will get back up. :)
frequent updates are appreciated! I love seeing you updated, I get excited. This chapter; your writing is amazing. and I'm still cheering for naomi, she's tough, she will get back up. :)
It dawned on me that this would be my life. Waiting and waiting, hoping and wishing, trying not to cry. I would be rocking babies to sleep in that rocking chair for a long time.
wooow. this blew my mind. i really feel in naomi's shoes right now. back to reading.