Sunsets and Silhouette Dreams. - Comments

It may not have come out the way you wanted it to, considering you rewrote it, lost it and then had to rewrite again, (which I understand, I was working on a side project to post, got the first chapter posted and the whole thing was deleted off my desktop so I bascially have to start over with no motivation).

I think it came out fantastic. Much better detail, much more interaction, a lot more insightful (which is always good) especially with a bit of foreboding there. It really did come out much better this time. Kudos to you. :D

It was a good chapter, but it seemed like you lost interest in writing it and it sort of lagged in your norm. It was good, just kind of short. Almost like a filler. It would have been a bit better if you had gone into detail with the Yvonne situation, or made their interaction a bit longer.

Filler chapters are still amazing and the last one was great. Hopefully you'll get your groove back though. [: The chapter was a lovely Jacob and Lucy scene. ^^ I love it. Keep at it!

i think this chapter is cute (:

I love this story! It's so well written and you seriously have me addicted!!
I love it. =]
Please update soon! <3

I love the story! But I especially like your style of writing. It is very good.:)..I beg of you to Continue to write. You have an amazing talent.

I am really liking this story!!
I am interested to see how things begin to unfold!
I loved the dream she was having. =]
I love your style of writing. It makes thiks story fun to read. =]

This story is really good!
You asked me to read it and I'm very glad I did!

This is one of my favorite Jacob stories <3
I can't wait for the next chapter.

i am absolutely in love with this chapter. jacob. y u so sweet.

Yush, mah banner's up there. :3 Mwahahaha. I'm still loving Rae and Seth. But yay! >:] Jacob and Lucy are getting closer. But no! >.< The Volturi! Ugh! They always have to come in and ruin everything. :P But the Cullens and the Pack will protect her! This is so exciting! I love it!

i love how descriptive you are! it makes it so much more fun to read (:

Hmm, you would think Edward would be more polite. Ah well, I thought it was great. And that's so sweet! Seth and Rae. [: Instant friends and more. Mwahaha. I like where this is going. Oh and I'll try making a banner, but it might not be the best. :P Can't wait for the next update!

Yay! I log onto Mibba after a couple days of vacation and get two chapters! I'll definitely be making a banner (not sure when). But I will! :D :D :D

Great new chapter!
And nice song choice with "Don't Stop Believing"(; ahaha
I'd make you a banner, but I suck at making them x)
Keep it up!!

Thanks for the refresher on the Quileute story, it's true, most people just pass it. Lovely update, more soon, please?

Amazing update. And that sure was a great refresher on the story of the shifters. But hmmm... How would the Volturi find out about Lucy? They probably want her since she's a human with a special ability... They want her to be with them as a vampire? xD I don't know, just guessing here. Anyway, brilliant. I can't wait for the next update.

Great new chapter!! :)
Lucy's character makes me more curious with each new chapter!
Keep it up!! :D

<3 love.
Lucy and Jacob are too cute. :) Update soon!

WOW, dear this is amazing.
I can't wait for more (:
<3