June 21st, 2011 at 09:52am
Sunsets and Silhouette Dreams. - Comments
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It was a good chapter, but it seemed like you lost interest in writing it and it sort of lagged in your norm. It was good, just kind of short. Almost like a filler. It would have been a bit better if you had gone into detail with the Yvonne situation, or made their interaction a bit longer.June 21st, 2011 at 05:24am
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Filler chapters are still amazing and the last one was great. Hopefully you'll get your groove back though. [: The chapter was a lovely Jacob and Lucy scene. ^^ I love it. Keep at it!June 20th, 2011 at 11:01pm
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i think this chapter is cute (:June 20th, 2011 at 10:20pm
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I love this story! It's so well written and you seriously have me addicted!!
I love it. =]
Please update soon! <3June 20th, 2011 at 09:48pm -
I love the story! But I especially like your style of writing. It is very good.:)..I beg of you to Continue to write. You have an amazing talent.June 20th, 2011 at 05:42am
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I am really liking this story!!
I am interested to see how things begin to unfold!
I loved the dream she was having. =]
I love your style of writing. It makes thiks story fun to read. =]June 19th, 2011 at 12:13am -
This story is really good!
You asked me to read it and I'm very glad I did!June 17th, 2011 at 08:31am -
This is one of my favorite Jacob stories <3
I can't wait for the next chapter.June 17th, 2011 at 03:40am -
i am absolutely in love with this chapter. jacob. y u so sweet.June 17th, 2011 at 01:20am
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Yush, mah banner's up there. :3 Mwahahaha. I'm still loving Rae and Seth. But yay! >:] Jacob and Lucy are getting closer. But no! >.< The Volturi! Ugh! They always have to come in and ruin everything. :P But the Cullens and the Pack will protect her! This is so exciting! I love it!June 17th, 2011 at 12:04am
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i love how descriptive you are! it makes it so much more fun to read (:June 15th, 2011 at 03:17pm
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Hmm, you would think Edward would be more polite. Ah well, I thought it was great. And that's so sweet! Seth and Rae. [: Instant friends and more. Mwahaha. I like where this is going. Oh and I'll try making a banner, but it might not be the best. :P Can't wait for the next update!June 15th, 2011 at 02:24pm
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Yay! I log onto Mibba after a couple days of vacation and get two chapters! I'll definitely be making a banner (not sure when). But I will! :D :D :DJune 15th, 2011 at 08:57am
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Great new chapter!
And nice song choice with "Don't Stop Believing"(; ahaha
I'd make you a banner, but I suck at making them x)
Keep it up!!June 15th, 2011 at 07:40am -
Thanks for the refresher on the Quileute story, it's true, most people just pass it. Lovely update, more soon, please?June 14th, 2011 at 02:27pm
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Amazing update. And that sure was a great refresher on the story of the shifters. But hmmm... How would the Volturi find out about Lucy? They probably want her since she's a human with a special ability... They want her to be with them as a vampire? xD I don't know, just guessing here. Anyway, brilliant. I can't wait for the next update.June 14th, 2011 at 02:07pm
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Great new chapter!! :)
Lucy's character makes me more curious with each new chapter!
Keep it up!! :DJune 14th, 2011 at 06:44am -
<3 love.
Lucy and Jacob are too cute. :) Update soon!June 14th, 2011 at 03:43am -
WOW, dear this is amazing.
I can't wait for more (:
<3June 14th, 2011 at 12:01am
I think it came out fantastic. Much better detail, much more interaction, a lot more insightful (which is always good) especially with a bit of foreboding there. It really did come out much better this time. Kudos to you. :D