The Guardian - Comments

its amazing

Hi, I'm on chapter 7 and loving the story, but I thought I should point out that there is no way Bella could be in Slytherin. For one, the house only takes purebloods, and Lily was a muggleborn. That, and she doesn't seem to be a particularly cunning character. Also, personally I don't think you've got Snape's character quite right, but not to worry, he's a hard one to pin down.... please don't take these comments personally, but as constructive criticism. However please think about whether Bella would be able to be in Slytherin seriously. It's a common misconception that they take anyone, but when you actually think about it, why on earth would they? The vast majority of them are very prejudiced towards anyone not pureblood. Thank you, and sorry if you find my comments hurtful. x

ah rebels gotta love em lol

:D update sooooooon

Woo :D Goooo Dumbledore's Army! :D

Very good story you've got going, dear. Updates are mucho appreciated :)

please update soon wanna no wat happens

Aw, thanks! Really? I thought they were already super long XD

Oh I absolutely love this story. Amazing plot line so far, I'd love it if the chapters were a little longer though >.<
Keep it up! :)

xXNewMoonXx: Oh thanks, totally wouldn't have known that!
LOL, goodness I always put blue because of Daniel Radcliffe, I'll fix it!

Don't worry you guys, few more chapters and things will...happen! haha XD

To DaniSayWhat! goodness, I am not that clever..maybe. Aha.

yay :)
thank you so much for updating. I can't wait to read the next update <3

I felt vageuly as if I were reading a conspiracy theory during that last chapter. It went something like this in my mind: Draco Malfoy actually presented the idea of using the Room of Requirement for the DA and even volunteered for the Inquisitorial Squad in order to provide information about Umbridge's next move. All the while, he was secretly receiving lessons from someone in the DA as a trade in order to further his own ambitions!

And that's about as far as my mind went before I got distracted by wondering when Harry's gonna find out she's his half-sister haha

<3

Aww :)

Aghh, when's she going to tell Harry they're related??? D: haha but I still love this :D

I'm sorry my previous comment was wrong D: Earth is an x in a circle follwed by fire being a triangle in a circle and i think air and water was correct.
I'm sorry if i annoyed you ^-^;

Ohmygosh this story is amazing!!!!
Don't murder me, but I haven't even read all the Harry Potter books and I love this story anyway! You really have talent! :)
KEEP UPDATING!!! <3

I'm in love with this story!
I have a question though: Aren't harry potter's eyes are green in the book? EITHER WAY still amazing and addictive! your such a good writer :D
btw, the Earth symbol is a tranigle in a circle. thats the one i learned about anyway when i was studying them O.O, there might be more so just think of it as a fun fact? (I hope you don't get insulted by this DX)

i hope he doesn't betray her cuz that wud be really sad :(

*Sing song*

Looooove ittttt!

Its about time I read A Draco Malfoy story!
Can't wait for the upate!
XDD

LOL, it'll be I spilled ketchup and pickle juice while eating a melting ice cream messy!
Haha shaylove, I thought the same thing too, but it was funny to write XD

At least she got to see Lily :)

Hmm, messy? This makes me happy :)
Oh, and this line, for some reason, made me crack up XD
"Well, lately I've been experiencing some unexplainable changes-"