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  • Marauder Hawthorne

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    Its super cute and I can't wait to see where it goes (:
    June 19th, 2011 at 08:49am
  • stopkellinme

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    Awww, very cute. And sweet. I liked this, good job! :)
    June 13th, 2011 at 06:07pm
  • Evil Angel;

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    All I have to say to this is Awwwwe! :3
    June 9th, 2011 at 06:31pm
  • CivilAnimosity

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    :3 Cute
    But I would go through and edit some more...like space your paragraphs out more. Everytime someone new speaks, that's a new paragraph.
    It just got a little confusing to know who was talking.
    June 9th, 2011 at 06:05pm
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