Gotham City Returns - Comments

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I really like what you have here, I used to adore Batman <3

The first chapter is a bit on the short side, but it's ok. The whole thing is good save for the fact that it wasn't a really strong start, though I'm sure it'll get better. I really love Harlequinn and the Joker though. :)

I'm very impressed with this :) I like how you've kept to the character's personalities and written dialogue in the way that they speak.

The only "negative" thing I have to say is that maybe you should space out your dialogue so that it is easier to read.

Good job! I'm looking forward to what happens next :)

I like it! :)

I'm sorry! But see, that's the major diference. You can't put a hero with superpowers with a clown without any. That's the difference between Marvel and DC. I'm gonna stick with DC. And thanks!

Poor Nightcrawler...just...evicted like that! It brings me to tears. :*( By the way, I love it!