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I really like this story :) I mean, I don't usually read A7x fan fictions but this one is really well written, your style is very good and I love the interactions between the characters and everything about your story. The only mistake I picked up was "He heart was almost healed" which should probably be "Her".
I'm glad I liked it because if you'd written a bad Avenged Sevenfold fic I would've cried, so yeah, can't wait to read the end :)

update soon! i miss this story and i'm really wanting to know what's going to happen next. my friend and i really got into it. please keep it going! i have been wondering for the past few weeks when you were going to update again. if you want, you should check out my stories too! :)

I got sent here through comment swap. I really liked the summary it was mysterious and inviting. I just had to read to find out more. I've already subscribed and reccomended you story, now it's time to check out what else you have if you have anything else, i hope you do. lol. Well maybe you could check out some of my stories, it's probably not as good as this but i like getting new readers.

I got sent to this story through Comment Swap and I enjoyed the reading experience, I don't believe I found any grammatical errors or spelling mistakes which always makes me love a story more! I hope you keep writing because your really good

Here from comment swap. First off, I love your layout. It's very intriguing. Honestly, I am not really familiar with Avenged Sevenfold, but I am really enjoying this story. I love the way you write and how your characters interact. The grammar is excellent. I think a summary would definitely help readers know what they are getting into. Overall, wonderful job and I am subscribing. (:

just so you know, i read this again & i'm going to tell my friends to read this story. it's good. & i'm interested to see what happens next! so update soon!

HOLY CRAP. okay, before comment swap assigned me this story, it had assigned me an MCR story, and it's been sooo long since i've read fics from fans of both bands. it's bringing back memories (: okay, so i really like how this is starting out on a vacation, and the names you chose for the girls. i also like how detailed you are- that's something i really enjoy reading- and your grammar. it's really sad that writers seem to be forgetting about grammar these days. i can't wait to continue reading!

I feel like I’m spamming your story. Comment Swap gave me this again to read. I really liked it…but CS keeps doing this to me. It gave me this other writer’s story 5 times to review after I had just reviewed it. Sorry about this!

This story is really good! I love the layout you chose, it matches so well with the story. Your words have a very elegant way to them, and the way you work with description is amazing. Keep up the great writing!

i'm subscribing, because i want to know what's going on. lol i like it though... then again i like everything that's avenged-themed. keep it up. i'm interested to see what direction this goes in. :)

i like that the summary really doesnt give much away at all, which intrigues the reader enough to make them read it, and the way the characters are with eachother makes them seem real. my only real problem is that i prefer reading completed stories, but i'm subscribing anyways to find out where you're going to take this. Keep going!

I absolutely love this. I like the layout, the naming of the characters, the way they interact, everything. It’s a very cool, laid-back bit of writing and the summary was interesting without giving too much away. The only way I’d improve this is by adding a character page, but as it’s early days maybe you could just add Lillian and Bethany to start off with? I’d just like to ask why you capitalized Drink? “Can I get either of you lovely ladies a Drink?”

Holy crap! I'm so flipping happy when I found out this was going to be an Avenged Sevenfold story. I love that band and this story. I thought the story so far is well written and good grammar. I'll be recommending it and subscribe to it. I can't wait to read more of this. It's going to be great. :) <3

I think it would definitely help out a bit if you had a summary. I don't know what I'm getting myself into without the summary. With that being said, the layout and the story are both really good. It's well written, the grammar is good. Your characters are likable and that's always good. I enjoy where this story is headed. It's really great. :)

Okay so I'm here thanks to comment swap. When I saw this was an Avenged sevenfold story I literally screamed with happiness because there my favourite band in the whole world.

I was sure I would get a crappy One direction story, but no I got an EPIC Avenged sevenfold one, you have no idea hoe much I love M shadows, he's my favourite, and I'm so happy that Jimmy is alive in this.

You are really good at writing, and very good with grammar (which I'm shit with) but I do know when someone is good with it... And you are.

So because your an Avenged sevenfold fan I was wondering if you would check out my story's, I have two Avenged sevenfold one's, one is written with my friend Darkbunny96, she also has some Avenged sevenfold story's you can read.

So this is long anuff so yeah consider me a subscriber and update soon.

Aww I really love this story! Lillian and Mark click really well(: And I love the way that he's a flight attendant. I love the layout, it’s so simple and easy to read. This story is beautifully written, with detail and description scattered throughout the story. The story flows very well, the chapters are a bit shorter than my personal preference but that’s fine. I barely saw any errors in grammar, punctuation, or spelling. It’s a great story overall! Keep writing!

i really like this so far

Sorry it took me so long to read & comment this, but I have to say, love: it's fucking AMAZING!
Well, no shit, considering everything you write is great, but idk, there's something about the vibe of this that's different than your other stuff. I can't say what it is exactly, but I really like it. :)
For starters, I thought the first part was very descriptive in terms of characters, the friendship between Lily and Bethany, and pretty much everything else, for that matter.
Also of course, I really like the storyline! BFFS going on a trip to the Domican Republic... and they happen to meet Avenged Sevenfold... seriously, what could be cooler than that?
Lol, basically, I just really love this story so far & I'm excited as hell to see what you do with it.
As always, your writing is phenomenal and also quite addictive. I'm totally subscribing! <3

Jimmy makes me giggle with the way he talks. I can't wait to see it happen. :)

I think this story is going to be really good.
I really like the begining. It was a good introduction to the characters and a little bit about them and where they're going and why they're going there.
I can't wait to learn more about these two girls, though.
Also, I liked how Matt was introduced right at the end of the chapter, which makes you wonder what's going to happen between him and the girls next.
I'm going to subscribe (: